Warrior Princess

Gee. This poem made me sad! It conveys a good amount of emotion, which is good, but I think it might be a little bit too concise, too abrupt. I ...

Rune sat on his saddlebag and poked dismally at the fire, secretly wishing Brand and Tarot would shut up and go to sleep already. They hadn't consumed any alchoholic beverages, ...

Hey, this is great stuff! I can't really find anything to nitpick so instead I shall praise your creativity. I love "Annabel Lee," but I would have never thought about ...

When Rune opened his eyes, the first thing he saw was his younger sister, Vesper. She was bending over him, her brown eyes wide. Glancing around blearily, he noticed his ...

Love lies bleeding in the dying light Like a scarlet rose tossed aside by life Trampled by countless feet that pass O'er the fading green of the withered grass. Whilst ...

LOVED IT!!! Suspenseful and very awesome. Post more as soon as you can!!!

Wicked awesome, baby!!! :smt081 (Sorry, I say that a lot, don't I?) Kyle is so hot (he's you, that must be why! :smt054 ) and that car-jump he does was ...

Okay guys i know i'm entering a bit late but this storybook sounded too cool to pass up! I have two characters. First Character Name: Jet Steelsheen Age: 16 Hair: ...

Good reasoning. Now, I really have no right to say this since I have never been in the "eat each other or die" situation, but I think I would rather ...

Yes you should definitely put some romance in it, love always makes a story a tad more interesting. If you're going to make Melissa like me (very sweet of you! ...

Hi people of YWS!! I am known around here as Warrior Princess. I am currently woorking on a sci-fi book. Please read Escape from the Academy Part 2 and Danse ...

I can't write haiku Because I'm not Japanese Hey . . . wait a second

I wandered through the ballroom Shadows playing on the silver walls And candlelight flickering like the souls Of young lovers gone before their time The dancers swayed and floated Over ...

[b] Continued from Escape from the Academy, Part 1. Pandemonium broke loose in the auditorium. Everyone started talking at once. Several people jumped up, trying to catch a glimpse of ...

Hi it's me again! You certainly have a good plot, lots of potential for action and adventure and suspense and all that other great stuff! :D I especially like the ...